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Soad: Hey all. Sorry for disappearing. Tumblr is so much fun. Anyway, I was planning on posting this later after I gotten it all done, but due to my lack of focus, I can't really get to it. So, I'm posting the first chapter of an OC MLP:FiM fan/clop fic. I'll try and get the rest soon. So, again, I am really sorry.
Warning: The characters in this story belong to Hasbro and the makers of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. OC ponies in the story belong to me, Soad24k.
Chapter 1: A Mighty Fine Howdy
It was a clear and bright day when my friend and I walked over a small hill. I took in a big lungful of air and said, "Ah, nothing like clear skies and the shimmering sunlight to make this the perfect day to get to work." I said with an upbeat tone.
"Ugh, man can we get somethin' ta eat, I'm starvin' over here." My traveling companion groaned, Pawz. He's a pale tan Zebra/Pegasus mix with three red rings on his forehooves and back legs, while I'm just a simple brown unicorn wearing a black collared shirt and glasses. I fixed my glasses and looked at him.
"Dude, you just ate breakfast, twice." I scolded at him.
"That was hours ago." He said as he dragged his long wings on the ground. "Plus, it's almost noon." He continued.
After several minutes of walking, I then felt my stomach begin to growl, indicating that I was getting hungry too, just like Pawz. He then looked at me with a toothy smug look, like I didn't hear that. My stomach growled again, and Pawz was still glaring at me as I tried to ignore him and my rumbling stomach. I tried to keep my mind off food, but then a delightful scent wandered into my nostrils. I couldn't resist but to inhale this sweet smell. Images ran through my mind like a train speeding down the tracks. My mouth began to water a bit and my stomach growled louder. I was about to give into my hunger until a small voice cried out.
"Help! Somepony help me!"
The cry snaps me out of my food daze and we both looked at one another then in the direction of the cry.
"You hear that?" I asked.
"Yeah, wanna go check it out?" Pawz asked back. I gave a nod and we headed towards the noise, off the main path. We both headed for a nearby lake, where the voice came from. In the middle of the lake we saw a yellow filly splashing about.
"Help, help me somepony please!" She cried out. We also spotted apples scattered about in the water and a small wooden half-barrel floating on the lake surface. I scanned the area and soon came up with a plan.
"Pawz, you think you can get the filly while I get the apples and the barrel?" I asked. He then sighs heavily and rolled his eyes.
"Fine, I'll get da kid." He opened his wings and set off for the skies and to the yellow filly. I used my magic to gather all the apples and put them in the barrel and bring them onto land at the same time, Pawz grabbed the flailing filly and brought her back to shore. She was coughing up water as I patted her back.
"Hey, you okay little one?" I asked with bit of concern. She coughed one more time before speaking.
"Y-yeah, I'm fine. Thanks misters."
"What were you doing in there?" I asked.
"Well, I was gettin' some water in this here lake to clean some apples. When ah grabbed one another rolled out and started floatin' off in da lake. So, I used the barrel to sail on the lake and when I tried ta reach for the apple I fell in." She finished explaining.
"Well, you better be more careful then." I said, patting her head. Soon a loud growl arose out of nowhere.
"What was that?!" The filly said in panic. Pawz and I looked at one another then at our stomachs.
"Heh, guess it's getting close to lunchtime." I said with a bashful tone.
"Well, if y'all are hungry follow me back to the farm. I'm sure my sister can whip you two up somethin'." Soon she started to push the heavy load of apples, but was making very little effort.
"Uh, would you like some help uh..." I gave a slight pause and waited for this filly's name.
"Applebloom's the name mister," She said cheerfully. "And yeah, I could use a hoof or two movin' this." I then used my magic to lift the heavy apple barrel up. "Mighty kind of ya ta help me mister. Say, what are y'alls names anyway?" She asked as she led the way.
"Oh, well, my name is Stephen Writes and this is my friend Pawz." I said as Pawz just gave a nod.
"Well, nice ta meet y'all two. So, y'all new to Ponyville?" she asked.
"Why yes." I answered, "I am here for a job assignment I was sent."
"What do you do mister Writes?" She asked eagerly.
"Well, I am a Census Pony." I told her. She then tilted her head when I said that.
"What's a Census?" she asked me.
"Well, my job is to go around from town to town and ask ponies various questions." I told her.
"What kind of questions?" she asked back.
"Well questions like: age, type of pony, family members and other things that's only for big ponies to answer." I explained to her. She then gave me a look, meaning that I insulted her.
"I'm a big pony! Can't ya tell me them questions too?" She asked almost stern like.
"Well, you are still young and these questions are for adults to answer." I said to her. Her face then turned sadden after that. I soon felt bad for telling her that, so I tried to cheer her up. "Hey, don't be sad. You did help me with one thing."
"Like what?" she asked with her ears dropped down.
"Well, you did help me get your name. That's helpful to me and for my job. So, thank you for telling me your name, Applebloom." I said with a generous smile. It then looked like she popped back into happy mode after I thanked her and was smiling big at me.
"Ya really mean it? Did I really help you out?" she asked cheerfully.
I nodded to her and said, "Yes, you did." She then smiled more at me. Soon after some time, we all were entering a long pathway. Surrounding us were hundreds and hundreds of apple trees. I have never seen so many apple trees in one place, well besides Appleloosa. This place makes it the second largest apple orchard that I have seen. The sight of seeing so many apples around us heightened my and Pawz's hunger even more. We walked up to a barn, looked normal, but it had a very...apple scent to it, probably from the surrounding apple trees.
Applebloom ran up to the barn door and called, "Hey big sis, we got some visitors!"
Soon an orange mare came walking out of the barn. "Howdy! What can I do ya fer?" She asked. I put the barrel of apples down and looked around the area a bit then at her when she came into view.
"Oh, hello, I'm Stephen Writes and this is Pawz. We were wonder of you could 'whip' us up something? We didn't have lunch yet." I said.
"Well shoot, y'all done come to da right place. Ah'm Applejack by the way. So what's y'all hankering for? We got Apple pie, Apple fritter, Apple dumpling, Apple crisp, Apple crumble, Apple Brown Bettie, Dutch apple pie, candied apple on a stick, Apple turnover and Apple cobbler." She then gave a loud gasp as she inhaled deeply. I was kind of amazed she named several apple pastries in one breath.
"Uh, I guess we'll take two apple pies." I answered, still a bit wowed at her performance.
"Well, come on inside and I'll fix y'all some." We then walked in the barn and once we all entered, I smelled a wave of apples rushed into my nostrils. The whole inside smelled like we just entered a giant pie.
"Now y'all two sit tight here while ah start bakin' the pies." She said then left the room, leaving us with her little yellow filly sister.
She walked up to us and asked, "So, are both of y'all census ponies?"
I then turned my attention to her and answered, "Oh no, this is my assignment. He's here for company." She turned to Pawz, who was on his side with one hoof holding his head up and the other on his side. He was looking the opposite direction then she looks back at me.
"So, if you're a census pony, you must travel a lot, don't ya mister Writes?" she asked me.
"Well, yes it does." I answered nodding a bit "But it's amazing to go to many different places and meet new ponies there too and take part in their events."
"Is it hard to become a census pony?" she asked.
"Well, a little bit. You have to ask very...uncomfortable questions." I said my face contorted a bit.
"Like what?" She returned. I fell silent for a moment and looked at her. She looked at me with big wide eyes, just waiting for my answer. I searched my mind to find a way to change the subject. I was about to open my mouth and speak, but luckily Applejack soon came back in the barn with two warm pans of fresh pies on a tray on her back.
"Okay, y'alls pies are ready." She announced. She used her tail to place the tray down in front of me.
"Thank you very much." I said and used my magic to levitate the other pie to Pawz. He sniffed the air, quickly jumps and turns and grabbed the pie and holds it close to him.
"Aw man, I thought dis will never get here." He said as he stared at the pie. He then shoves his face in the tin, munching madly at the helpless dessert. We all watched him as he devoured the pie. After he was done he then began to lick the bottom of the pie tin. I was slightly disgusted but also entertained at the same time at him. After he licked the tin clean, he set it down leaned back with his hooves behind him. He then let out a hefty sigh.
"Aaww yeah... dat hit the spot." The girls giggled at him and I was halfway done with my pie.
"Well, he should be happy from now on." I said, biting in slice of the pie.
"So, what's brings y'all two here fer anyway?" The orange mare asked me. I swallowed the bite and answered her.
"Well, I was sent here for a job I have to do. You see I'm a Census Pony." I then explained to her what my job is. She nodded, meaning she understood what I said. Soon I finished the pie and spoke to her.
"So, shall we begin?" I asked her. She nodded and we both began walking inside the house, leaving Pawz and Applebloom in the barn. We both entered her living room and sat on the couch. I then used my magic to conjure a clipboard and some papers also a pencil. I then levitated it near me and began writing down some information I gathered already. I turn my attention to the blonde mane pony and began asking her various questions.
"So where were you born, Miss Applejack?"
"Right here in Ponyville." She answered.
"And do you have any other siblings and/or family members living with you?" I asked.
"Sure do, my big brother, Big Macintosh, and my grandma, Granny Smith." Applejack replied.
"Okay," I said as I wrote down the names and their relations to Applejack and Applebloom.
"So, any other relatives you have?" I returned.
"Well, I do have a cousin, but he's in Appleloosa." She told me.
"Appleloosa you say?" I asked, "So you're Braeburn's cousin then?" She looked at with a bit of shock in her expression.
"How'd you know dat I'm Braeburn's cousin?"
"Well, when I visited there a few weeks and he told me that had a cousin in Ponyville. So, I just added two and 2 together." I said.
"Well, now ya know." Applejack said back.
"Now let see..." I scanned the paper, looking for where we stopped on. "Ah, here we go. Okay so, what is your occupation here in Ponyville?"
"Well, ah'm in charge for da apples here. We grow, buck and sellin' dem in da market."
"Oh, so you're a fruit vendor then, or should I say apple vender?" I asked, putting a bit of humor in my words.
She laughed a bit, "Heh, yea, guess ya could say dat."
"Alright, moving on," I said, looks at the sheet. "Okay, so what are your hobbies?"
"Well dats an easy one, buckin' apples." She said with a grin.
"Heh, I bet you're pretty strong to buck down those apples all by yourself." I said, complimenting her.
"Well ah am kinda tough, but ah ain't like dem otha mares." Applejack said
"Oh? How does being tough make you different from others?" I asked.
"Well, Ah'm all work and no play, somepony said ta me one day. Heck, Ah'm feelin' dat they're right. Ah'm always buckin' trees all day, workin' day and night. Dem apples ain't gonna buck demselfs down." She then let out a low sigh of sadness. This made me bit melancholy seeing her like this and we reached the last question.
"Well, we made it to the last question." I said, looking at the paper. She sighed again that made me looks back up at her.
"Say, y'all think ya can do me a favor?" She asked me.
"Uh, sure thing Miss Applejack," I replied.
"Ya think ya can...y'know?" She then fell silent. I looked at her puzzled is to what she want me to do. She then started to move close to me. I soon felt her hoof on my leg. It made me jump a bit and then I looked down at her hoof and up to her eyes. She stared back at me with her light emerald green eye. I kinda knew what the look and her expression meant, but I wasn't too sure yet. So, I decided to play stupid and let this roll on.
"Uh...can I...what?" I uttered
"Can ya follow me to mah room, I don't be wantin' mah lil sister ta be hearin' this." She said as she got up and making her way to the staircase. I then sent my paper and things away and followed her upstairs. We then were walking down a small hallway, which had four doors, two on each wall. We walked to the last door on the left wall and entered, this was probably her bedroom, I thought to myself. This upped my suspicions on where this is going. She set her hat down on her dresser and sat on the bed. I just stood in the doorway, watching her. She then patted a spot next to her, inviting me to sit next to her. So, I casually approached the bed and sat down. We sat there not saying a word to one another. It was getting very awkward for me, so I decided to speak.
"So, what is it that you wanted me to do?" I asked. I knew I shouldn't have brought that up, but she just scooted closer to me. So close that I could smell the familiar scent of apples in her mane. My wonders were soon almost at its peak for where this is all leading up to. She began to nuzzle herself on my left arm, which made me a bit uncomfortable. I felt her hoof on my leg again, but she was moving it up and down my leg.
"Uh...M-miss Applejack?" I stuttered as she started to lean over to me. "M-miss Applejack, what are you doing?" I asked.
"Now y'all should t'known where this was headin' fer, right?" She said with a seductive smile. I knew right from the beginning, but I didn't want to spoil it for her. So, I played along with her by giving a nervous chuckle.
"Heh, uh...y-yeah." I then I felt her move down to my sheath, I was really taken by surprise at her movement. I felt myself blushing a bit as she started to rub slowly.
"M-m-miss A-Applejack? W-w-why is you doing this for?"
"I knew y'all wanted t'do this with me right when we met." She said, gaining speed on her rubbing.
"And stop with all this formal junk, you can just call me AJ." I soon blushed more as I felt the head on my member slowly emerging out. The head poked itself out and began to grow. She then gave me a seductive smirk and started to stroke me. I tried not to get too excited, but she was stroking me so well, that I slightly gave out a deep breath through my nose. I was hoping she didn't hear that, but I noticed she began to stroke faster. I tried to contain myself, but her hoof work on me was too good. I then let out a sigh of pleasure, noting her that I had given in to her.
"Ah see y'all startin' ta like this, aren't ya?" She said as she moved in front of me and down, her face meeting my semi-erect stallionhood.
"Uh...Miss App...AJ, w-what are you doing?" I stammered.
"Now y'all just sit there and let me do all the work." She said as she began to lick my member. I jumped a bit as her tongue touched me. She soon made her way down, nearing my balls, and back up to the head of my stallionhood. I felt a pleasurable chill go down my spine as she worked her tongue around the tip. I started to breathe a bit deeper as she tasted me. I could hear her breathing, letting me know that she was enjoying the smell my cock was giving off. Soon my whole shaft was coated in her saliva. She gave my head one last lick then gobbles it. I gasped lightly at her warm breath on my tip.
In my head I thought, 'Well, it's happening to me again here as well. I'm sitting here in some mares' bedroom, on their bed and getting head. Just like in the other cities I went to.' My thought was then interrupted by AJ's bobbing. She started to suck me off, using her tongue to lick around. I sighed in pleasure for her sucking and bobbing. I looked down at her and she looks back up at me and our eyes met. In my head, I wanted to put my hoof on her head and feel her mane, but would she let me? So, I slowly moved my right hoof and softly petted her head, she's continues to suck and lick my member as I did this. I then started to stroke her mane. She didn't seem to mind or just didn't care. She then began to move her head fast and taking about half of my stallionhood in her mouth. I sighed much deeper and heavier as I continued to stroke her golden yellow mane. The more she dipped and bobbed the more it felt good. It soon got to a point where I started to feel sexual pleasure beginning to rise. I knew she could feel that I was close, so she moved faster and deeper, nearly deep-throating me. I moaned some more and felt my orgasm closing in. I just wondered one thing, was she one of those kinds that liked to get messy and get it all over their faces and manes or those who holds it in and gulps down every last spurt? I then felt her warm mouth leave my wet shaft and felt the cold breeze of the room. She looked at me with a lustful stare.
"Now it's y'alls turn." She said as she got and back onto the bed and laid on her back, her hind legs spread apart showing off her marehood to me. I gazed and blushed hard as my glasses slid down some. I scanned her whole figure from her tailhole up to her face. I felt my member twitch at the sight of her sex.
"Well what y'all waitin fer?" She asked me with a seductive grin. I knew what she wanted me to do, I've done this many times in the past and still act like I never done this in my life. So, I removed my glasses and my vest and placed them on the nightstand near the bed with my magic. I lowered my head and neared between her loins, I could feel the heat radiating from her sex and the warm scent of apples ran into my nose. I opened my mouth and stuck out my tongue out and with the tip, I tasted her. She let out a slight sigh as I did that and did it again, this time it was a slight moan. I then began to slowly lick around her marehood, getting it coating in my saliva. She moaned more and more as I slobbered over her slit.
"Aw yeah...that it's right dere..." she spoke in a tone of bliss. I soon began to venture my tongue between her flaps. She left out a short gasp as my tongue entered her folds and slithered in deep. She moaned more and the sweet taste of apples touched my tongue as I slide in more and began to lick around inside slowly.
"Mmmhhhfff..." she moaned as I licked more and tasting her insides. Her scent got stronger and it was burning the inside of my nose. I then began to lick deeper, moving my muzzle closer to her moist marehood. She placed her hooves on the back of my head, telling me she's loving this and wanted me to go deeper and really eat her out. I happily oblige and shoved my maw in her slit and licked deeper than before.
"Ahhh...ya must' a...done this before..." She said in between moans. That's when I knew I was doing too well, started to slow my licking.
"Hey, why'd ya stoppin' fer?' She asked, glaring down at me. I looked back and didn't a word do to the fact that I had my snout deep inside her marehood. She pressed my head hard up against her inner thighs, making me eat her out more. So, I did. I returned to my fast, deep slurps inside you tender insides and AJ resumed her blissful moans and lay back down. Soon I then tasted her sweet juices, knowing she was about to climax. She lifted my head and glanced at my twitching rod and back at me. She pulled me up until I was at her face and my pulsating member near her lower lips. The head of my shaft rubbed against her wet slit and she let out a soft sigh, I just breathed deep.
"AJ, you sure you want me to do this?" I asked as she started move her lower body, making her wet folds grind against my stallionhood. She then moved up and my tip started to prod her warm entrance. She sighed again and motioned her head, signaling me to keep going. I replied back with a nod and gave a small push in. I then slid myself in to the hilt. AJ moaned loud as I gave a long sigh. Her vagina was so warm it felt like my cock was being bake like a pie in an oven. I began to pump in slowly, letting myself feel her warm inner temperature then steadily gain speed. AJ starts to moan more as I pushed in deep inside her. Soon I let myself go and let my hips move on their own, making my shaft plunge in deeper and faster inside this apple farmer mare. She gasps some and moaned in pleasure, while I have at her and thrust harder. The bed soon began to rock from our movements. I continued to shove myself harder and deeper in AJ as she moans loud in ecstasy. I soon felt her getting wet from my thrust, I knew she was getting close to her climax as well as me, but I didn't know if I should unload inside or not. I soon lost control of my hips and started to ram into her hard. The bed rocked and creaked from my pounding as I started to feel my sexual pleasure rising. I cock throbbed hard inside her, telling her that I was close. I increased my pace, thrusting faster and deeper, making my member reach more inside her. She then out a loud moan of pure bliss and her orgasm splashed around my cock and inner thighs. Once she was done with her climax, I pulled myself out and my member throbbed one more time before spewing several long white ropes of my stallionhood. Some reached up to chin while others landed on her chest and stomach. I let out one last shot before panting and leaning over the blonde mane mare.
"Y'all...should of...came inside meh." She said in between pants.
"I'm sorry AJ, but I...couldn't risk the chance of you...you know." I replied.
"Ah well shoot. If ya were nervous bout given me a foal, why didn't ya wear protection?" She said giving me a look like I should have. I didn't say anything. We soon washed up and headed back downstairs. Then I remembered that I didn't asking her the last question.
"Oh, AJ, before we head back, I have one last thing to ask." I said as I summoned the clipboard and pencil. I looked at through it and was the last one. "So, your sexual orientation?" I asked from the sheet.
"Well, shoot. Ya done know what it is." She answered nudging me with a smile. I smiled back and wrote down the info and we headed back into the barn. Once we entered, we saw a sight that really took us by complete and utter shock. We saw Pawz on his back, his dick hanging out, still oozing his semen and in front of him was a sperm covered filly with a big red bow in her mane.
"What in Tarnation is goin on in here?!" AJ blurted out waking both Pawz and Applebloom. After some time explaining, Applejack decided to be merciful on Pawz, I can't really say the same about her little sister though. So we both headed off the farm and towards town.